Wednesday, 16 May 2012

Evaluation


Comics, can have enormous educational value not only in perception, but also in the process of creating it. This form of educational activity is so effective that it is associated with entertainment and famous heroes, perhaps a great support not only in learning to read and write, but also provide knowledge of nature, mathematical and historical. This combination of education with an element of popular culture, which is a comic book, helps shape the critical reception of the media. The very creation of comic books by the students develop their creativity in several areas; writing, drawing and composition, and in addition they may face the challenge of creating storyboards.

Contrary to appearances, work on the comic book transition requires many steps on the road from idea to finished picture stories. When conceived its subject, create a distinctive character, which can easily be distinguished from the others. Writing a script and is another very important element; it decides what text appears in a "bubble" on the picture. Then ready illustrations must be accompanied by narration. Create a comic book is also an interesting form of learning to work in groups, where I could share of responsibilities and jointly decide on the content I wanted to pass in my work.

The complexity and richness of species, which is the comic that makes it an extremely flexible means of communication, could use for a number of areas, aimed at different groups of target audience. This form, although primarily associated with entertainment, may be an interesting carrier of knowledge. Currently, we meet not only with ever faster evolution of the comic and its forms, but with ever more innovative ideas for its use for example online.

My task was to fulfil the requirements of graphic narrative unit which is all about creating my own comic. In order to gain a full mark I was meant to research, plan and produce my comic. At the end I was demanded to evaluate, reflect on my work and explore improvements needed, what could be done better next time if I would face similar project.

At the beginning of this unit I started my research by dividing comics into two genres western and eastern. This task helped me to separate my research and made it more organized. Firstly I watched film based on western comic style ’’Watchmen’’, to gain an idea of what characteristics are defining and highlighting this style of graphic narrative. Later on I looked at the comic itself and I compared film and comic together I gathered information about features of this particular style and I repeated exercise for eastern comic by watching and comparing manga ’’Fruits Basket’’. To expand my knowledge about comics I also have research the history of manga and eastern comics and I putted the presentation together of what I have found about the subject matter.

Once I could easily define and distinguish both of styles together I could carry on with other investigation. I have researched about characterization of the character within the literature which also appeal to graphic narratives. Next I moved into more depth researching. To prepare myself for creating my own comic and finding some ideas, I chosen a comic ’’Iron Man’’ and I analysed all the aspects of it; narrative structure, components, image construction and significations. Afterward I did the practice task which purpose was to educate me in planning my own comic. The task was quite straight forward, based on comic I researched in this case ’’Iron Man’’ I was demanded to create the twist story, new idea that will be opposite to the one published already in the comic. I did managed this brief quite well, I drawn some sketches and I looked at character profiles as well as generating ideas about the story line itself. I think this task was really helpful to me as I get a taste of planning my own comic, therefore when it came to do it I knew exactly what I was doing. I have also looked at mythical, symbolical and social features f few of chosen comics and I analysed them really carefully trying to include as much information as I possibly could.

Subsequently I was ready to create my own ideas. I did come up with three different stories ideas; first is a western comic about girl Amy who is transferred into her dream, second is again western comic during Second World War about Edward a young boy with spited personality, and third a last one is manga narrative about Nukka ghost who lives in the word of living being invisible for normal humans. In my opinion all three ideas were really strong and could be improved well. I only had to do one comic, so I came to a decision to produce a questionnaire and do primary research of audiences. Before it I drawn sketches of each character for audiences to be able to see the visual side of each story and get familiar with characters. The results of my questionnaires were divided, but majority of people voted on the third idea giving me useful hints of how I could progress my story.

Before continuing with my chosen idea I undertook other research into ways of publishing my work along with comparing my idea to similar products and how they created the image to pass on the story to the audience effectively. The manga that I looked at to get wider image later on reflecting on my work are; The Soul Chaser by Studio Kawaii, Todd Allison & the Petunia Violet by Nozmo, I Want To Give You Your Smile by Krazeh Kai. At the end I have decided that my comic’s will aim at the young adults or teenage girls and will be published alongside with the girly magazine. My comic and magazine will be separated however the comic will be released episode by episode, the role of the comic will be just like an extra gift to a magazine just like for example free lip-gloss or hairbands.

When I figured out how I want to publish my comic and who my target audience are, I could continue with planning and designing the actual product. Therefore I started to draw the main outlines for my comic so that later they could be transferred into Photoshop software where I have edited them carefully, with attention to every detail. It was really time consuming, but I am satisfied with the result I gain at the end.    

If I could improve my comic I would probably change the script to less complex, I should kept it shorter; straight to the point rather than explaining every single point of the story. Also I would make more space for ’’bubbles’’ (speech and narrative marks) as I think at the moment they haven’t got enough space in the result some images may look a bit chaotic. Although the actual edited drawings are looking funky and entertaining, fulfilling its role well as they have this mystery theme and message behind them.

To summarise I think this was a very good unit, I have improved my designing skills a lot and I gather a lot of information about the discipline I have never worked on before. I found it very interesting and I hope I could do similar project in the future taking into my account the mistake I did this time and trying to improve them if I would have a chance.

MY COMIC CHAPTER







Wednesday, 11 January 2012

BUDGET

Student name: Sandra Ksiazek
Project title: In Between/ Comic Magazine
Project Budget
Non
Required materials
White A4 Paper, Pencil, Rubber, Black Marker, Scanner, Photoshop Software
Equipment (To buy or hire)

White A4 Paper - £2

Drawing Pencil - £1.20

Rubber – 50p

Black Marker - £2.30

Scanner - (own) around £60

Photoshop Software - (own) £657.60
Personnel Costs


Printing Cost

Publishing Cost


Me as a designer and editor




Average Price - for printing and publishing 10000 copies of the magazine £6300000
Post production costs
£6300723.60
Contingency (10%) of budget
£630072.36

Script

Title: In Between
Main character: Nukka (pink)
Good Worrier: Ray (yellow)
Prologue Page:
Everyone believes in something. With no faith people are lost. We, humans are always thinking about life after death and maybe there is a life but, is this life good or bad?
The devil was always around possessing lost souls. The angels were here to protect misplaced spirits helping them find their right way. But when you stuck in between two worlds the only dream, desire you have is to find your place and somewhere where you belong. Find your rest...
Page1:
Box 1: Medium shoot of main character’s face with her eyes shut (sleeping) 
Box2: Medium shoot of her standing on the edge of high building with the scared face expression. Night time. Text Box: What is going on??
Box3: Close up on her legs running.
Box4: Long shoot of her and the fire exit door, when she is opening the door.
Page2:
Box5: Mid shoot of Nukka going down the stairs and some men walked through her body.
Box6: Extreme close up on her hand opening the door.
Box7: Long shoot of her standing on the street and thinking. Text Box: It is impossible! It cannot be true!
Box8: Close up of Nukka’s face, mouth covered with hand and eyes with tears as the girl began to cry.


Page3:
Box9: Medium shoot of the girl’s and another guy back standing behind her saying, Text Box: Don’t worry. You are the chosen one and I will help you.
Box10: The girl is turning toward new met person, the shoot of two characters standing in front of each other. Text Box: Nukka – Who are you? What do you want from me? Why am I invisible for anyone else apart from you?
Box11: The guy is replying to the girl slowly walking on the street. Text Box: I am a good worrier. My name is Ray and I am here to protect you and train you how to fight against evil. I will help you find three magical stones that will set you freedom and gave you rest and peace.
Page4:
Box12: Nukka is suspicious. Medium shoot. Text Box: Why would anybody wanted to help me?
Box13: The flash back to the golden book, close up. Text Box: Ray – Because only you can save the word as it was written in a golden book, the book which tells the future and the past. However it is very easy to change the path of the history, so please promise me that you will be a good girl.
Box14: I promise.
Page5:
Box15: They are in the apartment standing in the middle. Long shoot, low angle. We are on the spot. This is my apartment which means your training room. You can stay here as long as you want, I beat you don’t want to life in your previous home now when you already dead. Your parents will still feel your existence, you may scare them. Anyway I won’t let you go, the devil will find you quickly. Whereas here you are safe.   
Box16: I am Nukka.
Box17: Ray opening the fridge. I know, are you hungry?
Box18: No.
Box19: Close up of Ray face with malignant but pleasant smile. Of course, you are dead.
Box20: Long shoot of Nukka lying on a sofa. I thought you are the ghost like me?!
Page6:
Box21: Ray standing in front of the sofa with sandwich in his hand. Medium shoot.  I am an angel. I can be invisible, but also visible whenever I want to.
Box22: Extreme close up of the girl mouth yawning. Lucky you... she yawned. 
Box23: Side view of Ray talking to Nukka, his tattoo is shown. Medium shoot from side angle. Go to bed, get some sleep. Your mind is still use to being a human.
Box24: Nukka lying on a sofa Medium Shoot. Thank you for everything. Goodnight.
Page7:
 NEXT MORNING
Box25: Extreme close up of Nukka’s face with sun rays on top of it, One eye closed and one slowly opening.
Box26: Her hand opening the doors of the room.
Box27:Long shoot of Ray training, with his leg kicking the manikin.
Box28: Both faces in one box, facial expressions. Ray – menacing, Nukka – curious. Good Morning, are you ready for the training? So go and get change!!
Page8:
Box26: Her getting change in her under wear, medium shoot.
Box27: Ray secretly looking at her through the door, medium shoot.
Box28: They are both in training room, with their faces red. Let’s get started!...
Box29: Nukka is repeating Ray’s movements. High angle.
Page9:
Box30: Close up on the action of the legs or hands.
Box31: Nukka is being vanquished by Ray lying on the floor, with grumpy face. Medium shoot.
TWO WEEKS LATER
Box32: Ray is being vanquished by Nukka. You are a quick learner!
Box33: Nukka is offering her hand as a help for Ray to stand up. Better than my master!
Box34: Ray is grabbing the hand. Close up. I don’t think so.
Box35: Now Nukka is lying on the floor and Ray is proud of himself, long shoot.
TO BE CONTINUED.